Sunday, September 27, 2009

The Middle Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Adjusting to light behind the middle eye,
age, becomes a stretching of all ties.
Pink shutters fall on mortal sight,
as instinct beckons complex flight,
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Ann Beard
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Simone Inez Harriman 10 February 2016

Ann this is a stunning poem. I have read it three times over and found so much truth and wisdom here.....10

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Fay Slimm 28 September 2009

This is a most moving insight into much that remains merely in question form Anne - - you have captured a wisp of light that surley will lift the serious reader and give much food for thought - and I especially found the two final lines appealing as a maxim for the best aims in life.... the whole piece is inspired and thank you for sharing it with us...... I am taking this one along in my favs to re-read - - top marks - - along with greetings from Fay in Cornwall U.K.

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