The Message......The Life Is But A Bassage Comments

Very sensitive peom that fits for the decade of Romeo and Juliet.10/10

It was her tool, it was a feeling a touching call from his soul... bask with me, let us glow..and there she sat..watching the sun and more of you..becoming more and very sure that the seed is very true..and her worries were never due, it was a message it was a feeling continued singing only you well written poem in eloquence and heartfelt one indeed! ! ! 10+++

Eloquently written. But the mood is poignant and filled with last things as well. Beautiful penning. Warm regards, Sandra

that was touching tale indeed...your words can touch the core of the reader's heart...nice one ma'am 10++

a heart touching and brain knocking poem written with a rich logic... liked it and appreciate your ideas... innovative approach..well done tamara dear...10+++++

an heart rendering poem.......... just the last stanza a beautiful piece of write....giving the message.........plz see my 10 ++++

yet the nostalgic thought inflicts upon the stillness the very innerness goes smoldering, seizing the soul in dark room, shadow rocks up to the muse, yet eyes looks on the last pegs of the dream, quite passionate write by the imagery, .well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing

beautiful imagery Tamara, how the sun plays and stealing our days..wonderful writting,10+++ watching with him how the sun plays, and it's beauty stealing the days.., to her he said bask with me in the life,

a most romantic scene of the couple on the mountain of love....possibly on different sides having identical dreams and passions, , , , ever drawing closer...and closer...leaving the reader wondering

Tamara, This's a very touching and beautiful piece, your soft toned lines give this a stunning feel to it. Its lovely 10++++

Tamara, This's a very touching and beautiful piece, your soft toned lines give this a stunning feel to it. Its lovely 10++++

a poetic work of art..truly a masterpiece!

Touching write indeed with vivid imaginary.............