How can I think of serious things,
when the air is alive,
with the flutter of wings,
How can I focus on writing a sonnet
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We'd be fools not to join in.What a wonderful invitation to the breath of feeling.Love Duncan
Wonderful is what this is a very enjoyable read, well done: -)
Another wonderful piece of work. I think you are definately in the right frame of mind. You are winning! Love Gyp's
For some reason this made me think of Robert Burns' poem about the louse crawling up the ladies' bonnet ribbon...if we could only see ourselves as others see US! All poets go through this same thing, this process of what I call 'Centering Ourselves! ' just to get it all on paper! Scarlett
What a lovely lighthearted poem Sylvia! Very nice. Sincerely, Mary
Hey, I liked this one enormously. Very well constructed and a joy to read. Thanks for posting it. Love Ernestine XXX
Splendid read with such encouraging words! I feel like taking flight to the woods to write now! Patricia Gale