Saturday, August 24, 2013

The Message Comments

Rating: 5.0

I heard the birds this morning,
They awakened me from a dream;
I was sinking in a sea of despair,
Drowning, but I couldn't scream
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Lora Colon
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David Lessard 02 December 2013

Lora, nice write. I am not trying to spout religion here, but I have to state that we (the US) are so far removed from God now, he doesn't hear our collective voices. We are too much with the world. But keep up the protests, as I will.

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John Brown 09 September 2013

A lot to think about in this one Lora. Well written too.

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Kevin Halls 25 August 2013

A powerful poem Lora you'd make a great Politician. Seriously though your poem hits the spot as it is heartfelt and true, I've said all along this world has it's priorities all wrong and it's hypocritical.Well said!

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Valerie Dohren 25 August 2013

Excellent Lora - very true, so much hypocrisy, and you have addressed it so passionately here.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 August 2013

Don't we all deserve a fair share Of happiness, and life's basic necessities - Can we make this happen - do we dare? an orwellian world with little hope in sight! thanks for the spirit of this poem, Lora.

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