Wednesday, June 15, 2011

The Mermaid Was Unhappy With Her House Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mermaid was unhappy with her house,
All the bric-a-brac seemed so passe;
How she longed for a more modern cave,
One where starfish, hanging on nets
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Patti Masterman
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Hans Vr 24 June 2011

Fantastic imagination. I think a lot important themes are addressed in this very original fable. Thanks, Patti. A wonderful piece

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

It was really incredible. Great poem indeed. A fine 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A dream of judgement day' on page 1.

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