Monday, April 20, 2015

The Mermaid Loves The Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dawn is approaching, an aurora is smiling,
The morning star on the blue stage,
With her wet eyes, drops tears that are boiling,
But the dew earth gets is free of her rage,
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Hazel Durham 01 November 2015

Stunning imagery with love adorned with all it's special qualities as the mermaid loves the love! Amazing write!

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Valsa George 30 April 2015

The morning star on the blue stage, With her wet eyes, drops tears that are boiling, But the dew earth gets is free of her rage, Beautiful imagery! Love these lines!

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Bisma Mirza 24 April 2015

Really Amazing.... beautiful...10 on 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 April 2015

A beautiful preaching of love the cause of creation......................10

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