Wednesday, May 28, 2014

The Mere Comments

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I came merely by chance the other day to the lake,
where we had lain finally untogether on the bank.
You from your life. Me from mine.
Or perhaps the other way around.
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Tim Kitchin
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Paul Butters 30 May 2014

A nostalgic poem indeed. I note this is very free verse if not prose - could have been set out as a story - but your varied length of line provides the right emphasis where appropriate. I'm all for such freedom. Forget the iambics and rhymes: just express.

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