Tuesday, December 27, 2005

The Merciless Sea Comments

Rating: ★4.0

I am suffocating,
The sea is patiently waiting
For my last struggling breath,
Then there came with great pain
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Cat Garza
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everything has a name but me 09 February 2008

Short, but wonderfully done! This language could turn this short poem into an epic story! A tale of frightful adventure and ravaging struggle. This is what I saw in these few lines, and you have inspired me to write evermore.

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Sandra Fowler 27 December 2005

Your poems have touched me. Cheers for your courage! Take care. Warm regards, Sandra Fowler

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