The Mender Comments

Wonderful command of language and rhythm employed in the service of noble sentiment.

what they all said.... Sweet testament to the redemptive power of live, and art.

Talk about yir' Poetic ''Dynamic Duo'', would'ya', now! Duncan nailed it all so well, and i must concur, adding only, that this honey & this nectar be of the sweetest & most mind potable variety, indeed...Sterling Work, Guys! ~ ~ ~

Like honey for the mind, nectar for the soul, , beautiful* Love duncan X

This is gorgeous! Love the echo of the line 'the silver flashing of a soul' that ended your earlier poem. You have successfully developed this striking image and produced another beautiful love poem - it's perfect! jz xx

OH, but this is good! Simple, to-the-point, and chock full of the promise of a deeper meaning! xxxElysabeth