Monday, August 6, 2018

The Memory Of Your Touch.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was sitting at the coffee shop browsing my diary, and that reminded me of someone for whom i have written beautiful poems or shayari.
Suddenly a sweet guffaw grab my attention, i thought i know this laugh, i just turned and see at table behind, ohh! Its you! whom i have been searching in my diary, my heart beats fast…. very fast, i love your guffaw, your attitude is same as usual, difference is that you are sitting with other girl and you kept your arm around her….
I thought does she fell the way i felt a year back ago, i bet not, i imagined sitting next to you and your arms over my shoulder.
I remembered that rainy day evening the weather was so awesome and you came and sat next to me.
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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2018

Hi Kavita, Unlike your other poems, this one is pretty long. Very emotional write. “I want to drown in your eyes” is the khwaish of the beleaguered lover, in memory of his loving touch long back. But she is confident of moving forward. Leaves a message for her estranged lover. Beautifully written. A 100+

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Kavita Singh 07 August 2018

just attempted to write a short story about memory of someone loving touch.. thank u for your beautiful words

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2018

Whenever i think about that moment and your touch i am filled withawesome feelings, your hand is holding my hand it seems like i have got a new reason to live my life, i want to keep my head on your chest and hear your heartbeat, i want to drown in your eyes and live inside you. a wonderful touch of love and in love that lingers inside the soullllllllll.. beautiful memories pictured very well dear poetess. tony

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Kavita Singh 06 August 2018

thank you for appreciation sir

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