The Memory of Now Comments
(For Eduardo Chirinos)
Downstairs I left a candle burning
In its light I'll read a few lines when I return
By the time I returned the candle had burned out
Those few lines had faded like innocence
You walk with me
The way moon walks along with a child sitting in a train window
I stood in the balcony one day
Waved a handkerchief toward the sky
Those who have gone without saying their goodbyes
Will recognize it even from far
In my handkerchief they have left behind their tears
The way early humans left behind their etchings on cave walls
Lyotard said, every sentence is a now
No. Actually it's a memory of now
Every memory is a poem
In our books, the count of the unwritten poems is so much more
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What a wonderful poem. So deeply touching and so beautifully expressed. Superb imagery.
" Every sentence is a now No, actually it's a memory of now" Intriguing conceptualization as also it's presentattion. Well deserved modern poem of the day.
The poem creates some of the most fascinating images which reflect upon the simplicity and purity of a poetic mind. Thanks and Congrats for sharing.
Superb images! Innocence, etchings on stone walls, tears, memory, unwritten poems - all come together!
Awesome drop. Like to read again and again. Imagination running wild here. Enjoyed thoroughly. 'Those who have gone without saying their goodbyes Will recognize it even from far In my handkerchief they have left behind their tears The way early humans left behind their etchings on cave walls'.. is so profound.10+++
In my handkerchief they have left behind their tears The way early humans left behind their etchings on cave walls.../// beautiful poetic expression
An exceedingly well expressed poem...a beautiful meditation on memory in relation to poetry!
Ah what a lovely poem! I loved some expressions: faded like innocence, The way moon walks along with a child sitting in a train window In our books, the count of the unwritten poems is so much more...
You walk with me The way moon walks along with a child sitting in a train window great imagery, this is stellar stuff, every memory is a poem indeed. Excellent choice for poem of the day! .
a great poem a great, great poem good for introspection thanks keep writing
Every memory is a poem - wonderful expression. I love the emotive expressions the poem share with us. Chandan
This is really a beautiful poem on memories having touching expression and nice diction. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
'Every memory is a poem In our books, the count of the unwritten poems is so much more '...is such a beautiful line. With age and experience one gets maturity. Nice poem indeed.
Words expression comes with circumstances., but they can make you feel better. Thanks for a wonderful poem
The 'now' is fleeting and quickly becomes a memory. This is so well said in the lines, 'Those few lines had faded like innocence' Every now is a memory of now.
wow its fantastic expression- Every memory is a poem In our books, the count of the unwritten poems is so much more
Such a wonderful poem by Geet Chaturvedi...............................
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7/20/2025 7:29:59 AM # 1.0.0
Most deserving as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Congratulations dear poet. Excellent choice of PoemHunter and Team 5 Stars full