Friday, October 21, 2005

The Memory Of Great Men Comments

Rating: 1.0

While I was eating
scrambled eggs
smothered with hot sauce
in Meng’s Restaurant
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Max Reif 21 October 2005

I find your dialogues and descriptions very vital, you really got 'New York' in this one, I'm riveted! Prose or poetry, as in the last one I read, I don't even care! Your endings are a little abrupt, though, at least for me.

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