I find your dialogues and descriptions very vital, you really got 'New York' in this one, I'm riveted! Prose or poetry, as in the last one I read, I don't even care!
Your endings are a little abrupt, though, at least for me.
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I find your dialogues and descriptions very vital, you really got 'New York' in this one, I'm riveted! Prose or poetry, as in the last one I read, I don't even care! Your endings are a little abrupt, though, at least for me.