The Memories, With Words We Have Created Comments

Awesome. Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing

Wow! girl, this is a masterpiece...its very touching, again your poetic talent shows in every word in this sad but fantastic poem.....that feeling tells you that maybe if he came and said goodbye there would have been closure, That crossroad is a hard place to be in, maybe just maybe he realized that he couldn't look you in the eyes and tell you that, he's leaving for good...because maybe you were too good for him, life goes on sisi wam yimpilo vele injalo..good luck. Siya_! !

Wonderful poetry, I have enjoyed reading it.

A great poem! May you fly to even greater heights in your fantastic poetic creations.I wish you good luck and God's blessing

I was attracted to this poem by the title and I was not disappointed. Strong, yet heartfelt words of love and loss beautifully written and a pleasure to read. If she did not say goodbye perhaps she could not find the words to match your depth and clarity.

Tender words so sweet yet so romantic, so gentle but very gigantic, the deep feeling mixed affection has by very large been amazingly expressed, the memories that never forget but forgive are of much significance in the heart, the body and the soul, .. This is wonderful The_African_Son