The Mellow Sun Comments
Your smiling face, fresh with life's sorrows and pain,
With past rejections, dismissal, digging deep into your psyche,
Your emotions tied in an unbreakable chain,
You have a rigid, routine that gives you control and power,
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Beautiful poem filled with passion. Positive ending with beautiful lines... We have fought with love laced with care, As we embrace the mellow sun....Very positive message this poem conveys, there is light at the end of tunnel..Loved reading each lines....
WOW beautiful poem Hazel full of love and passion everything a poem should be
With all of that pain there was light at the end of the tunnel, beautifully expressed
We have fought with love laced with care, As we embrace the mellow sun., , wonderful, ,
what a beautiful poem the imagery so good, the words so beautiful and the concept, outstanding really love it
Lovely imagery. I particularly like the idea to embrace the sun.
sun is the source of light and energy on our planets not only our love peace joys and sorrows are also bestowed by this mighty star. the glory of sun is nicely crafted. Thanks for share.
Mellow indeed! This poem glows with a beautiful light!
What a mellow sun thou art? Hazel, you have drawn the picture of a handsome and compassionate sun who is unfamiliar to us in these regions at these times.... Well written.
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7/30/2025 6:44:13 AM # 1.0.0
Lovely lines that are loaded with love and pregnant with passion. Beautiful progression shines with spendor sun. We are not lost anymore in a desert of scorching sun We embrace the mellow sun... Well done my friend!