Friday, December 30, 2022

The Meeting Comments

Rating: 5.0

The words have a magic
Spun by nuances of language
The cadence of your voice floated to me
Across the table separating our bodies
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Nosheen Irfan
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Words weave magic in poetry. And thus, in poetry, words words just dissolve and remain invisible. Only poetry can be perceived. Marvellous poem, Nosheen.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 31 December 2022

That must have been the sweetest meeting ever imaginary though. Beautiful diction

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David Wood 31 December 2022

Very moving Nosheen. Words have magic but the embrace with the kiss that nourishes the heart and soul.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 December 2022

Very beautiful Happy New Year! ! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2022

A beautiful poem. I liked this part of this wonderful poem the most, 'Like an ant 🐜 with a chunk of sugar Words flowed into my deep recesses'. Top score.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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