Tuesday, June 21, 2005

The Meek Comments

Rating: 4.7

She travels alone, carried by currents
unknown even to her.
Here but for a moment.
Fragrant blossoms rest upon her head
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Moriah Lederman
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Ben Gieske 07 December 2007

Marvelous all the things you associate with her. That last sentence holds my attention: 'make tiny impacts that change everything they touch.' How true.

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Jemarie Ragudo 09 November 2007

The touch of the gentle breeze is sometimes too spiritual to comprehend. It can only be felt. What a beautiful poem! Perfect 10!

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Tears In Rain 07 September 2005

You had me whisked away already at whim or wile, more was not needed. Very lovely.

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Gillian.E. Shaw 28 June 2005

Sheer loveliness! The form of this poem is very special. Well done!

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Raynette Eitel 21 June 2005

This is a gentle, lovely poem. Raynette

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Moriah Lederman

Moriah Lederman

Eastern Washington
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