The Medicinal Relief! Comments

Deep gloom drips from every word of this verse but it's sweet and touching.

I'm sure your mind is always working Shahzia to write such great poetry.

If you go on writing such good poems and most of us going on reading them, where is the scope for the real orphan poems? Your relief comes not from writing them alone. We are all here to supplement to your other needs and so a poet`s medicinal relief is a bliss of the highest kind.. Excellent rendering and rightly condensed thoughts have made your verse great. Here goes my 10 out of ten and from the midst of relief in mount, you please have one more smile..

ah wat a lovely poem has got created with eyes blurred hands numb heart dead and mind not working at all…: -) a wonderful write

In a spark of some unconscious imagination Or in an intuitively telescoped montage Of my deep vision A wonder start to the poem. Pain the protagonist is felt in my brain. Good display of feelings implied in the verse. Beautiful writing.10/10.

Yea, it is in moments of isolation that orphans of poems are born to us! After all the labour pain, once when we see the face of the new born, it is like the medicinal balm. We forget all the pain and rejoice! ! The intense sense of melancholy is paining... but an incredibly beautiful poem is born! !

Some times better poems may appear when one reaches the time to get relieved by medicine. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

by writing orphan poems with broken reeds the feel of such writes is special to me i must say some can talk some can run some can paint and you can write, you are born to do this and you prove that point with each word of your piece....splendid work didi

Ration of heart that words of heart and medical through journey of heart

Very Fantastic poem indeed Shahzia..This poem carries an in depth meaning..I might have read as many as five time to grasp it. But each time, I came out with different messages.. First of all the poem is written with heart, whose world is far away from the world like orphan, secondly this poem is written by a person one wih eyes blurred, hands numb, heart dead, poor working of mind and these heartfelt poem, do fetch money for self medicinal relief..Really appreciate the way you presented it. Loved reading it..plus 10

The Medicinal Relief! by Shahzia Batool is a nice poem that speaks about the the orphan and... nice poem thank you sister

The Medicinal Relief! by Shahzia Batool is a nice poem that speaks about the the orphan and... nice poem thank you sister