Thursday, December 21, 2006

The Medical Examiner's Love Comments

Rating: 3.9

the medical examiner knew
she wasn't up-to-dating
but this was the woman who
he'd spent his life a-waiting
...
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Chuck Audette
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A. Madhavan 06 January 2016

Gives me hope, one day, my fear or fault may be chosen for special approval. Surprise element is a merit.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 January 2016

Awesome write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Very funny! ! ! good laugh!

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Gregory Vest 06 January 2016

I like it, but eww.

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Susan Williams 06 January 2016

I acknowledge the humor and wit in this piece but it is not for me. I see he has written other poems so I shall read a few more and hope the topics are more in my comfort zone. I do think he has wit so if he reads this comment I want him to know that I acknowledge this while not a fan of this kind of topic. No poet will satisfy every reader's taste. After all, as hard as it is to believe, there are people who dislike Robert Frost! Gasp!

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M Asim Nehal 06 January 2016

Nice humour in your poem....enjoyed it.

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Rajnish Manga 06 January 2016

Humour for the sake of humour is alright but humour for the sake of or leading to a woman's autopsy is not palatable. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 January 2016

Confession is part of life. Nice work and, thanks for sharing.

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R H 23 December 2006

Ha ha! Your quirky narratives just get funnier! Tit-tilating in a dark and macar-bra way! I think you've been watching too much CSI! ! Justine.

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Danny Reynolds 22 December 2006

1stly: Ahahahahah! 2ndly: I'm going out on a limb here. I reckon we have a common curse, (Occasionally) where the pun comes first, then we wrap it with the story, which is as much a surprise to the writer, as it is to the reader. (That's where the pun is, though?) Danny p.s.10

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Esther Leclerc 22 December 2006

Was it a case of 'Tit-for-T(h) at'? Maybe she took his... member, in which case, she started it; he then exacted revenge. We should write for 'CSI'! Maybe you do...? ; ] Est

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Anna Russell 21 December 2006

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ! ! ! ! ! (warnings? maybe to go to the loo BEFORE you read it) Hugs Anna xxx

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