the medical examiner knew
she wasn't up-to-dating
but this was the woman who
he'd spent his life a-waiting
...
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I acknowledge the humor and wit in this piece but it is not for me. I see he has written other poems so I shall read a few more and hope the topics are more in my comfort zone. I do think he has wit so if he reads this comment I want him to know that I acknowledge this while not a fan of this kind of topic. No poet will satisfy every reader's taste. After all, as hard as it is to believe, there are people who dislike Robert Frost! Gasp!
Humour for the sake of humour is alright but humour for the sake of or leading to a woman's autopsy is not palatable. Thanks.
Confession is part of life. Nice work and, thanks for sharing.
Ha ha! Your quirky narratives just get funnier! Tit-tilating in a dark and macar-bra way! I think you've been watching too much CSI! ! Justine.
1stly: Ahahahahah! 2ndly: I'm going out on a limb here. I reckon we have a common curse, (Occasionally) where the pun comes first, then we wrap it with the story, which is as much a surprise to the writer, as it is to the reader. (That's where the pun is, though?) Danny p.s.10
Was it a case of 'Tit-for-T(h) at'? Maybe she took his... member, in which case, she started it; he then exacted revenge. We should write for 'CSI'! Maybe you do...? ; ] Est
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ! ! ! ! ! (warnings? maybe to go to the loo BEFORE you read it) Hugs Anna xxx
Gives me hope, one day, my fear or fault may be chosen for special approval. Surprise element is a merit.