Saturday, March 29, 2008

The Measure Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

No I don’t want to turn back the hands of the clock
I don’t wish to be younger than this
I just want to be me, as I am here and now
To enjoy the enjoyable kiss
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Alison Dunn
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Allison I realy enjoyed every line of your poem.keep it up

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Alison Cassidy 05 April 2008

This is quite lovely Ally - a spiritually reflective piece, understated and in perfect meter (anapaestic tetrameter again) . The 'now' moment is all there is and all there every will be, so what a splendid idea to stay in it and forget about befores and afters. Glorious poem. Worth a place on my yoga studio wall. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ivan Donn Carswell 29 March 2008

It is an exacting measure too, one which says love IS, and you capture it well. Rgds, Ivan

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Don Mcwilliams 29 March 2008

It is always so difficult to just...be. This captures the notion very well. Don

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casey osman 29 March 2008

way to size it up, i like this.

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