Friday, August 10, 2012

The Meadows. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The green velvety grass land,
Sway back and forth with band,
I am a seed with the woody gene,
Dispersed in various meadows of greens,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Valsa George 15 August 2012

Oh towering tree! Where will you finally have your roots? ? ? Indeed a great poem! !

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Valerie Dohren 14 August 2012

Wonderful poem, very descriptive and full of imagery.

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Dr Yogesh Sharma 12 August 2012

veeraiyah subbulakshmi ji very beautiful poem about forests and nature. Really there is a concern for world environment. Well written full marks 10.

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Heather Wilson 11 August 2012

An enjoyable read, one poor woody seed trying to find a home, beautiful write.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 August 2012

The meadows are the grasslands where we can't find woody trees, because the soil and the climate are not suitable for the trees to grow such places. In this poem I liked to compare human characters to that of the meadows insufficiency and the lack of human relationship.

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