In the meadow of the valley,
Where wild flowers are roaming free.
There are multitudes of colors
And their backdropp forest greens.
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Lovely! I see myself right there, right now in the meadow. Forgive, but I would suggest drake or something similar over snake perhaps? Snakes tend make us visualize something negative instead of the paradise the rest of the poem does. I love your style. It's so classic.
This is wonderful work - I've read it many times over the last few months, and I was looking for more information on you, the poet Robert Edgar Burns. Please reach out to me on Instagram if you're there. I would love to read more of your work, even outside of what you have here.
Sorry to inform you. My husband, Robert Edgar Burns, passed away April 20,2012. He has hundreds of poems, stories & songs on various sites online tho including videos of him singing on YouTube. If you do Google search or other searches you can find him. Thanks for your kind comments.
I meant to give you my name but hit send accidentally instead. I am Robert's widow, Kathie Loomis Burns. Thank you again.