The Maze Comments
The days have past, waiting miserably fast
I have not been counting the days of this maze
Topiary walls looking so high, and waiting for the days to go by
Watching all the things go by, waiting to die
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Such a nice start, Syquan. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.
A good start with this first poem, though some of the rhymes seem a bit forced. Keep on writing more. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation written from the heart. Thanks for sharing Besch.
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7/27/2025 5:18:07 AM # 1.0.0
Difficult ot get out if trapped in a maze - nice.