Monday, March 19, 2007

The Maze Comments

Rating: 5.0

You and I, what are we?
We are children lost in a field of corn
Ever turning, never finding, the exit
Searching, yearning, desperately
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Michelle Tiddy
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Marci Made 19 March 2007

Can you get any better? ? ? ? Express anymore heartfelt feelings then you already do? ? awesome, sad, beautiful Michelle...~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~marci. :)

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JoAnn McGrath 19 March 2007

That was as deep as a corn field wide Thank You JoAnn

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Maya Took 19 March 2007

Wow, A strong feeling is passed through the poem! I liked it very much Thank-you

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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