I was walking lone there,
Where we once had been.
I sought the house we lived in,
In the lush lush green.
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A very good poem! You're getting better and better all the time
beautiful ink nilakshi.flow, rhyming and wordplay is so nice.liked it.
I always wish to write such poems, , short yet strong, , on the face feflecting the genius of the artist..You did it beautifully...I would end this comment with a question-in the entire poem the image that comes to the mind is of something now past, theme remnant, and of memories...but suddenly at end you said about bllomming and infancy which creates images of birth, beginning and freshness, , , It somewhere seemed to contradict my previous captures! ! ! Hope you keep going great...and do tell me when you again upload a new poem..It is a pleasure Regards, , ,
excellent memoir..... felt amazing when reading...really nice..
mystics of nature.... great artifact! felt amazing while reading.... well write
Once again Beauty and Talent is clearly manifested through this powerful and well written poem! Honestly, it is superb! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC