Saturday, March 10, 2012

The May Flower Tree Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was walking lone there,
Where we once had been.
I sought the house we lived in,
In the lush lush green.
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Neela Nath Das
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Romeo Della Valle 05 June 2012

Once again Beauty and Talent is clearly manifested through this powerful and well written poem! Honestly, it is superb! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 20 April 2012

simple and beautiful poem.thank you for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 20 March 2012

A beautiful poem. Very inspired.

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Pheko Motaung 15 March 2012

A very good poem! You're getting better and better all the time

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 March 2012

beautiful ink nilakshi.flow, rhyming and wordplay is so nice.liked it.

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Aman Sa 11 March 2012

I always wish to write such poems, , short yet strong, , on the face feflecting the genius of the artist..You did it beautifully...I would end this comment with a question-in the entire poem the image that comes to the mind is of something now past, theme remnant, and of memories...but suddenly at end you said about bllomming and infancy which creates images of birth, beginning and freshness, , , It somewhere seemed to contradict my previous captures! ! ! Hope you keep going great...and do tell me when you again upload a new poem..It is a pleasure Regards, , ,

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Nanthinii Mohan 11 March 2012

excellent memoir..... felt amazing when reading...really nice..

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Nanthinii Mohan 11 March 2012

mystics of nature.... great artifact! felt amazing while reading.... well write

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