Thursday, September 10, 2020

The Master Potter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Poem - The Master Potter

By: Ross Mabey.
 
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Bri Edwards 19 September 2020

clays not clay's. right? :) I like the poem but, in " His charming ways, wins many hearts" , I'd use " ways win" . and using " many a heart" would make a closer rhyme to " art" . bri ;)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 September 2020

A well penned wonderful poem. Truly full of art....10+++++++++++

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