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We think only We've a manipulative mind
Above us all there is super calculative mind
Who can juggle our life with his mastermind
And still gives a chance to repent and be kind
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Terrific poetry here! It is so full of wisdom and truth about the feebleness of man!
Beautiful poem. The sentences - Our every greed will be measured And every deed will be treasured- is exuberantly rhyming and meaningful.
Life is not always a bed of roses One has to surpass all the phases In the journey of life what have we gained Trampling sensitive hearts in the bargain....thoughtfully put. A value laden piece of poetry!
Just remember for every tear one has to pay Our misdeeds counted God will have his say....this is brilliant! Have patience and taste the nectar. Believe in God.5 stars for this powerful poem!
Excellent poem dear poetess.All lines are significant and informative.Our every greed will be measured and every deed will be treasured.Very true of the super calculative God's mind.
Profound writing ‘Just remember for every tear one has to pay”.... Very true. But who remembers this?
Life is not always a bed of roses One has to surpass all the phases...universal philosophical thought. Classic one.
Man is a tool in the hands of God. We act as He prompts.The master mind is beyond everything man visualises...10
very nice poem.. beautifully depicted the situation.. clear 10 Hopelessness-Under sky Tuesday,7th July 2020 you may possess immeasurable power there shall be an unaccountable treasure but you have to leave it behind pray to God and find a heavenly place Hasmukh Mehta Courtesy: Paul Captain
God is here, there, everywhere God is very near in the heart of fair no frustration awake the master mind from the inside den the wicked, to ban................
I felt revisiting this beautiful poem! You have constructed the poem so immaculately that a reader can find substance in each line! Let me quote two more beautiful lines from your poem: Life is not always a bed of roses/ One has to surpass all the phases....I appreciate the reality depicted in this fabulous poem! My pleasure reading it again!
sacred love and faith on GOD. O dear here every I am actor and actress in this world the omniscient and only spectator is GOD. So over acting is all avoidable... great
Our every greed will be measured and every deed will be treasured-The God almighty predetermines, directs and controls everything…A great poem dear poetess…10
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The rhyming also show its quality! Thank you for taking the time to write so beautifully!