The Master Mind! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

The Master Mind!

Rating: 4.9


We think only We've a manipulative mind
Above us all there is super calculative mind
Who can juggle our life with his mastermind
And still gives a chance to repent and be kind

We try hiding ourselves from the reality
For sure one will lose the sanity
Our every greed will be measured
And every deed will be treasured

Life is not always a bed of roses
One has to surpass all the phases
In the journey of life what have we gained
Trampling sensitive hearts in the bargain

Just remember for every tear one has to pay
Our misdeeds counted God will have his say
One schemes for one's own selfish reasons
But God has his own agenda his own seasons

Remember God the Greatest He controls it all
Man just pretends till the day he falls.

© Aarzoo Mehek

The Master Mind!
Thursday, March 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 17 March 2016

Amazing, Outstanding and brilliant. We always pretend as if we already know, whereas we know not....You nailed the hypocrisy hidden in humans....Loved it, Loved it and Loved it...Aarzoo with double A and triple plus. +++

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2016

There is a super calculative mind! ! ! The Creator Almighty; who created everything. Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A. Madhavan 30 April 2016

Pious thoughts, will appease the troubled mind that blames the times or someone else or some unknown external force.

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A. Madhavan 30 April 2016

Pious and consoling to a person beset by setbacks, which she or he cannot explain why they occur.

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Timber Koleden 16 June 2025

The rhyming also show its quality! Thank you for taking the time to write so beautifully!

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Timber Koleden 15 June 2025

Terrific poetry here! It is so full of wisdom and truth about the feebleness of man!

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PREMKUMAR C N 28 August 2023

Beautiful poem. The sentences - Our every greed will be measured And every deed will be treasured- is exuberantly rhyming and meaningful.

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 August 2023

Thank you ao much for appreciating my thoughts

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2023

Life is not always a bed of roses One has to surpass all the phases In the journey of life what have we gained Trampling sensitive hearts in the bargain....thoughtfully put. A value laden piece of poetry!

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Rob Lamberton 18 January 2023

Thank you for sharing these words of Wisdom!

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