Thursday, May 1, 2014

The Mask Of Dreamers Comments

Rating: 4.8

I see a light in the distance.
Shinning, shimmering, it's rays reaching out,
Almost as if calling for me.
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Julianna A. Laplante
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Khairul Ahsan 29 June 2018

A ray of hope disappears under the mask! The last line is melancholic.

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Shobana Gomes 03 May 2014

A wonderful poem. Thank you.

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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

A very well written poem. Enjoyed the read!

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Aamir Hussain 01 May 2014

Beautiful poem, Julianna. You write wonderfully well :)

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