Saturday, January 7, 2012

The Mask I Possess Comments

Rating: 5.0

Those memories still haunt me
I can't sleep at night;
I don't know what to do
I don't know whom to fight.
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Pooja Shanbhag
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Pooja gi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2012

Amazing! What can I possibly say that some others have already said! A great and well crafted write! You are not along, I have been there many times over and over but I always managed to survive and move on! I if can some of my poems, you can see that I can identify with this thought provoking write! 10+++ WELCOME to the Poetry World and thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 28 January 2012

dear sister, kindly read the BHAFBAD GEETA daily morning, and listen stories from the mother, , , , , you must find a pleasant sleep..

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Deep Mukherjee 27 January 2012

hmm; i can easily corelate this to my thinking! ! great work! !

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Vipins Puthooran 08 January 2012

it's full of emotions/great work....

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Neetha Sasidharan 08 January 2012

that's really grt... wow.. mindblowing.. full of emotions.. i can undrstnd dat feeling..i had felt it 4 some time..but now i came out of dat...now i'm my original self... gud rhyming set..keep writing..u r a grt poettess

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Debasish Mishra 07 January 2012

An arresting poem.... that interestingly expresses pain merged with poetry....n d inevitable mask tht clouds everyone!

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Debasish Mishra 07 January 2012

An arresting poem.... that interestingly expresses pain merged with poetry....n d inevitable mask tht clouds everyone!

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Saadat Tahir 07 January 2012

Behind my laughs are a thousand sorrows, Behind my smile is a breaking heart; I don't know where this is leading to I don't know why, I'm falling apart..... sigh...young people... :) nice lines great keep going cheers

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