Monday, December 9, 2019

The Mask Comments

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The mask slipped today,
It fell into the toilet along with my putrid insides…
It fell all over the wall and floor.
It smashed and fell deep into the bowl.
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sharon Genade
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 January 2020

Depression! ! Ache and fury! ! ! ! ! With the muse of the mask. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 January 2020

All the colours are black and white. A grey haze covers my eyes../// the salient point of this poem; wise writing

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