The Mask Comments

Overcrowded city life is dehumanizing. For all its lack of gloss, countryliving lets your soul breathe . Your poem took me in to your experience and made me look at my life. Everything I have striven for has been always a little out of reach and trying to attain a more a secure sophisticated lifestyle was only done through leaving behind relationships and cutting connection with a more natural flowing life to which I need to return. For me your poem describes an experience from a world that denies its own cruelty. Beware of the belief that financial success is the solution it is a false " god" and it may never happen. Very effective poem expressing your experience. Thank you