The Mask Comments

When mask of anger, greed, enmity is removed.........what remain is pure joy of self.........Good Write................10+++......

nice write...explains how an over assuming mind forgets own real self...10

Masks face combine blemishes lines flaws beauty passion grace fashions unfolding as you described a test in the end.....of you...thank you for this wonderful poem..iip

realy luvd it...reminds so much in ourselves

Dear Lily, though you are a very young poet, and a 10 would be too much for you, I give it to you for the many beauties of the poem.It's the play of the life (albeit you have not enough experiences) . Go on with new fresh ideas. Work for high verses! Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

I really like this, its definetly symbolic but at the same time easy to understand and connect to.

This is a nice symbolic poem. Finely composed.

you've open the mask of writing greatly...........well done