Saturday, March 31, 2007

The Mask Comments

Rating: 5.0

Won't you look behind this mask,
This hair, these teeth,
This smile so dark!
Won't you delve, make more free -
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Joe Hughes
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Joe Hughes 26 November 2017

Thank you for your comments

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Stevie Taite 26 November 2017

Pretty neat! I, on the other hand, find it hard to hide what’s going on inside. I’d be a poor poker player!

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Sandra J. 24 April 2009

I favor the part that says 'I'd pass no test. I cope with life's unending hours, They crawl along, Some sweet, some sour.' I believe that it is far to easy to have a mask, but from what I've learned, no one truly wants to know anything deeper then what they see...a fake smile in place of a tear, nowadays no one cares.....

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