The Marvellous Comments

Very provocative. White can have many definations. 10 for your originality. Always your friend, Sandra

You manage to convey such a unique and sensuous delight in your subject (although some words (kinkburn, popia, topsillies) confound this reader) . My favorite couplet is 'it was so white yesterday, was a white yesterday'. A simple, stark delivery that sends shivers up my spine. Marvelous is a marvelous poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Hello Raveendran, Beautiful poems, fine memoirs... Thank you for your kind Komments, Best wishes, Tsira