Friday, October 19, 2012

The Martian Experience Comments

Rating: 4.0

My aircraft landed on a soft bunch of needles,
that sang and danced and made me feel sort of feeble
though when I stepped out I knew it was not lethal
because the earthlings were flying on it like Martian beetles.
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Anna Winther
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Patrick Czyz 01 September 2015

A good poem for the all the sci fi fans.

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Abhishek Mishra 27 September 2013

Amazing..masterpiece: -)

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Alec Latha 10 September 2013

do you work on heaven for you look much likr heavan workers invite alec latha on facebook then well talk abt the martian exp.

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Thomas Duncky 26 August 2013

its like reading an ancient comical modernized by the illusions of love...a well crafted piece

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2013

Good imagination. Thanks for the note. 'that life is missing without love and admiration.' Got the message.

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Kelly Seale 10 December 2012

Beautiful Write Anna... I enjoyed it thoroughly... Great Ink! ; -) Kelly.

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Kelly Seale 10 December 2012

Beautiful Write Anna... I enjoyed it thoroughly... Great Ink! ; -) Kelly.

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Babatunde Aremu 14 November 2012

Very good. The poem takes the reader on an imginative journey. I like it

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Connor Whyte 12 November 2012

Wow very imaginative great sense of imagery and well written, Great write.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 November 2012

very nice. strong imagination.liked it.

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John Brown 02 November 2012

A very unusual poem Anna, which I liked.

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Romeo Della Valle 21 October 2012

Excellent! Beauty and Talent magically blended in this well crafted and thought provoking write! Awesome! Congratulations and WELCOME to the Poetry World! This your first poem is fantastic and impressive! 10+++ Thank you and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Onyeme John 20 October 2012

Nice poem Anna, I enjoyed the rhymes too...keep writing

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