Wednesday, November 2, 2005

The Marsh Comments

Rating: 4.5

The marsh that I stand before shall yet soon be my end,
It's murky waters my destroyer,
The marsh grass my captor,
And how I yearn with such passion to step into my grave,
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Holly Heron
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Gregory Gunn 25 January 2006

Dear Holly, Of the poems of yours I've perused thus far, this particular piece screams the loudest. Without a doubt, in my opinion, there definitely is a talent to be cultivated. May I recommend Tiffany Etter, Sarah Bursich, Lynsay Ann Evans, and Alyssa Levy as possible mentors for you? All of these young poetesses provide great promise for the future of poetry. A spectacular 9 rating for this one. Sincerely Gregory

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Denis Mcmahon 10 November 2005

hi... thanks for this poem from australia

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