Thursday, February 7, 2008

The Mars Bar Comments

Rating: 5.0

(A friend's uncle once asked why there weren't any poems about Mars Bars. This is why.)

Nails glinting in the glow of candlelight,
she grips the bar and gently pulls apart
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Wild Bill Balding
COMMENTS
Frank Cannon 28 July 2008

Try as hard as I might dear Bill, sadly, once again my chocolate had melted stickily in my hand long before your poem had reached its climax! ! Now for some strange reason I have a desire to smoke lazily before having a nap........

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julesx 64 07 May 2008

such decadence, such temptation mmmm, such conatations! ! ! please write more x

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