Saturday, March 21, 2009

The Marriage Under The Autumn Garden Comments

Rating: 5.0

Welcome to the auspicious marriage ceremony under the fresh autumn garden...

The scent of autumn as it lingers and disperses into the soft chill of the air.
Almost feels like somebody has perfumed the musky air.
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Premila Patel
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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 June 2009

heir undying love under the magnificent yellow autumn garden…Autumn garden still blesses the marriage, wonderful scintillation nature yet talking under the vale of tune, descriptive,10+++ thanks for sharing

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Fiona Davidson 10 April 2009

Beautiful and unique Premila...makes a wonderful read...Fi 10+++

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Yvonne Selase 08 April 2009

very lovely poem. you, re a good story teller.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 April 2009

You painted a beautiful picture with strokes of words.....i would call this a prose poetry....10+++.........

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