Thursday, March 13, 2008

The Marines Comments

Rating: 3.5

As they walk with guns in their hands.
For america they will always stand.
They tell there family not to cry.
But they think will i die.
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Shastina McElmurry
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Jennifer Llaqui 23 July 2009

I thank u for writing this poem...itss amazing..my brother is a marine...i love him very much..your poem helped understand marines...god bless you and the marines..

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Greenwolfe 1962 16 March 2008

This is really a nicely written poem witha lot of rhyme which I like. I gave it a seven which is a good number from me. I'm a very hard grader. I thought it was well worth reading. GW62

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Barbara Terry 13 March 2008

This is a very nice tribute to our fighting Marines. Tears are coming now, because so many have to needlessy give their lives so that the rest of us can be free. 'If the Army and the Navy ever look on heaven's scenes, they will find the streets are guarded by the United States Marines. (From the second verse of the Marines Hymn.) Thank you so much, for sharing, Shastina, and always... WRITE ON! ! ! ! ! Love & hugs, Barbara

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