Glenn, this is a great idea of a poem and is packed full of great lines. I personally think it's technicality really requires the reader to concentrate though. Perhaps trying to present it in a series of shorter stanzas would be worth experimenting with. But aside from that, I think it's great.
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Glenn, this is a great idea of a poem and is packed full of great lines. I personally think it's technicality really requires the reader to concentrate though. Perhaps trying to present it in a series of shorter stanzas would be worth experimenting with. But aside from that, I think it's great.