Sunday, August 24, 2008

The Mantle Goes Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun ain’t up,
It shines pink and indigo;
It was red and orange
Just a half hour ago,
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Dante' Camerlengo
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C H Sund 29 August 2008

You old dog! Post the good ones here? Enjoyable read and great images. Excellent ending.

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Dawn Slanker 27 August 2008

This is another one I really enjoy. The imagery and your ability to describe how the light and color constantly morphs as the sun sinks below the horizon. Beautiful poem...so calm and serene.

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