Monday, August 27, 2018

The Manifestation Of Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

My body shakes
my mind races
I can feel
everything he faces
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Aqua Flower
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Kostas Lagos 29 August 2018

A poem about empathy, full of fine expressions

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Aqua Flower 29 August 2018

What a good description of this poem. I never thought of that but yes the poem is about love and empathy for the ones you love. thank you for your comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

I hear his worry, I hear his call what he feels, I feel it all.......touching expression with nice nice theme. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Aqua Flower 28 August 2018

Thank you for reading this poem. You are not the first to quote those same lines. Glad you like the poem and thank you.

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Carl Roussell 27 August 2018

To care for someone so much and you can fell their pain but not take it away; all you can do is to let them know you are there with them through the rough times. An excellent poem.

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Aqua Flower 28 August 2018

That is the worst feeling when you feel the same pain yet you cannot help them they have to help themselves. You are right being there for them is the only thing you could do and I know that's the most important thing to do thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2018

I hear his worry, I hear his call what he feels, I feel it all..........I appreciate the beauty of poetic expression! An amazing poem! Well penned! (10)

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Aqua Flower 27 August 2018

Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 August 2018

Such a well penned poem👍👍👍

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Aqua Flower 28 August 2018

Thank you for all the thumbs up! It Was Written quite easily the words just flowed as the emotions were spilled.

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