Thursday, August 3, 2006

The Manacled Man's Itinerary Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tiny Termites are born to destruct the timber
And rust will destroy the iron.
Precious gold is everlasting,
But the shine will bring thieves more closely.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 04 August 2006

A poem of courage in the face of adversity. But the human spirit is greater than all the obstacles that might occur on the roadways of life. Shine on, my friend. Fine work, Nimal.

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Alison Cassidy 04 August 2006

Nimale, This one sounds like a metaphor for life. The roadblocks may deter even the most determined traveller. Your first lines read loud and clear. Beautiful. I am slightly confused by last few. Please enlighten me? love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Emma Johnson 04 August 2006

This is a deep piece. Susie xx.

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