Friday, January 30, 2009

* The Man Within * Comments

Rating: 3.4

I lay my hand upon your chest
And feel the man within -
The trembling of a heavy heart
Beats just beneath the skin;
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Linda Ori
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~ Jon London ~ 07 February 2009

Linda, what a beauty you've written here...wonderful flow of true meaning....10++ Best of Health & Happiness Jon

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Linda, Of course Ridge gives the best comment on this work of yours. You know, rhyme is not fashion, but by gosh it makes a poem memorable. Even though males are so different to we females, you can understand the emotion that they so often cover. Such an insightful glimpse into the heart and soul of a man. Karin Anderson

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Ridge Cahill 31 January 2009

To understand someone so intimately, as evidenced here, is to look deeply into that person’s soul, casting aside all else that may obscure its clarity. To write of that which you see honors that someone beyond that one is able to adequately describe…it honors you as well and is testament to the beautiful being you are. It is simply beautiful in every detail.

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Anita Atina 31 January 2009

Wonderfully sensitive writing, encouraging acceptance, allowing a sharing that goes beyond the physical.

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