Saturday, January 28, 2017

The Man Who Makes Collage Comments

Rating: 4.0

Sat there on an after the night before wall
a too low you'd think to contemplate a fall wall
head in hands re-running the looped moment
when the heart big as an ox let the head have its day
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Barney Rooney
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 February 2017

Interesting word play and wonderful rhyming wow. Yes words can't be taken back easily. I ESP liked hoy u rhymed in homage with collage, nice choice there. Kudos. So nice to read from u again poet.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 08 February 2017

Barney, very interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it. Another 10 for you! ! !

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