Saturday, August 16, 2014

The Man Of My Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.9

Each night I prepare for the ritual,
When through my window moonlight streams,
I say a prayer, then close my eyes
And await the man of my dreams
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Lora Colon
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Abekah Emmanuel 06 September 2014

How painful and pathetic it is, to miss the person dear to our hearts when in reality..... he or she is no more! indeed, I am praying for you that one day, this man of your dreams will return and have your usual 'ritual' and sail the whole night. A very passionate poem that goes straight to the soul. Well done great poet!

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Amitava Sur 27 August 2014

A very comforting and mystical imagery which is beyond any explanation, reaches the the soul in a land of peace being embraced with your love you dream...... loved it.

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Heather Wilkins 18 August 2014

oh how our dreams can carry us away. a restful night full of dreams so romantic. I frequent there myself love your poem

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Chuy Amante 18 August 2014

Lora! A bit more mystical and metaphysical than the others! ! ! I love it! I go to a happy place each night too! I enter reality!

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Brian Johnston 18 August 2014

Just remember the immortal words of Albert Einstein Dear Poet and your life will be full to the rafters.... 'Reality is an illusion! '

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 August 2014

when we make for our love a permanent abode in our heart, passing times can't ever make a void. magic ink Lora.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 August 2014

'Nighttime provides enduring love.. That with the daylight disappears' - Very, very touchy!

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