In the stillness of the night,
A storm did blow in.
It knocked out all the lights
And lashed upon the windows.
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Loads of images here Ashleigh, you have connected with reader.Not all poems are able to do this.Loads of tallent. Don't stop searching for the one that makes you feel good.Something that really touchs you.I got alot from this poem Thankyou. I think Your A Star! Love Duncan
Ashleigh you have given this poem a great amount of depth and as much expression, I found it very gripping. cheers Sylvie