Monday, June 15, 2015

The Man In The Checkered Shirt …. [outward Appearances; Human Ones; My Thoughts; Medium] Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I sat in car at downtown curb,
I wondered with what title I’d disturb ….
the readers of this poem.
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Bri Edwards
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Valsa George 13 July 2015

This is a splendid write Bri. Seeing the image of a man in the rear view mirror of your car.... what all interesting surmises and assumptions you have made and the conclusion at the end is superb! Yes 'looks' are not enough to judge a person. Beneath the facade of external appearance, lies at the inside, the real man! A well deserved 10

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Charles Darnell 20 June 2015

A fresh take on an old adage. Nice work, Bri.

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Kim Barney 17 June 2015

I like the way your brain works and figures things out. I totally agree with all your thoughts here, Bri.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 15 June 2015

More than a poem, it is a lesson, in my vie, Bri. We, very often waste our precious time looking in to unwanted things in others' lives, whereas, what should have been looked in to remains unnoticed even. There is a deep meaning in the poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks very much.

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