The Man I Wish To Be Comments
Ask me, what I wish to be,
To answer - I would say to you
I wish to be the pride and pleasure of my father,
The delight and desire of my mother.
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You have one advantage over Paul; you recognize your Faulty life and seems willing to shut the door against it unlike Paul who did not. Yet he was converted so your conversion is imminent.
A well conceived and nicely texted piece. Deep disturbing feelings written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing Joanna.
A refined poetic imagination, Joanna. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
Encouragement and acceptance move in parallel way. An interesting poem is brilliantly penned here.10
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Yet, with shame, I dare to implore their mercy. Tell them both to end their grieving. For I'm on the road to Damascus. Like Paul, my conversion is imminent. beautiful comparison with St. Paul and his life and conversion and commitment. love this poem. tony