Wednesday, December 3, 2008

The Man I Looked At Comments

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When I stand in front of the door,
Then saw the party was done,
I found you sat on the stone,
Just dream in on and alone, , ,
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Kaede Rirunaru
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Very good poem Kaede. I think if you are really meant to see him again it will happen. If it doesn't just keep being focused on what is important in your life. You are young and attractive and you have much to look forward to. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. Karin Anderson

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Min Sia 06 December 2008

Lovely..worth the wait... But I hope you could see him again... Great poem..i could feel the passion inside..the love..will not perish..nor lingers..but just stay... Beautiful!

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Anjali Sinha 04 December 2008

awh so cute dear i love your calling him and telling that you will wait hope he sees it fast and arrives to take his princess. great write +++++10 anju

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Kite Remedy 03 December 2008

Another side of a Cinderella story, I presume. Sorry if it's incorrect. anyway, that's nice. keep it up..

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Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
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